Explanatory visa letter

Hello, I am afraid of having the reason 04 because after my degree I started working under an internship contract. 02 years later I submitted my application to Campus France, here is an explanatory letter I have crafted, could you please correct it for me? (I have been accepted in the private sector, all my supporting documents for the 02 years of internships are up to date). I will correct the spelling errors.

To the attention of Madam Consul General of France in x Subject: explanatory letter of my study project Madam Consul, I have the great honour and privilege of providing you with explanations about my study project through this letter.

Holder of a higher diploma in technology in biology, I had the honour of joining X where I have been under a pre-employment contract for 1 year.

I have benefited from several training sessions that have greatly impacted me, among them: the training of the national malaria control programme. Indeed, during this training, we were informed that my hometown is designated as a red zone by the national malaria control programme due to the high rate of severe malaria and the presence of rare malaria parasites observed only in this region.

From there, my enthusiasm and passion for clinical research were born. Indeed, I wish to join these research teams to conduct investigations in my area, clinical trials to develop new effective treatments against these types of rare parasites and also understand their origin.

However, having only the higher diploma in technology, I lack the specialisation in the field of clinical research.

France being a European leader in clinical research, with cutting-edge technology, many researchers available on site as well as research centres: all the conditions are met there to undertake quality learning to achieve my professional project.

This is why I applied for the Biotech 2 training at X, a biotechnology school recognised by the State that trains research engineers. For the financing of my studies: my elder brother xxx will support me with €615/month upon my arrival in France throughout my academic year 2023/2024. My elder sister xxx will accommodate me for free in her apartment at xx in xxx which is 55 minutes by public transport from my school.

You will find attached the other necessary documents for a comprehensive assessment of my study project. Remaining at your disposal for any questions, please accept, Madam Consul, the expression of my distinguished consideration.

@Andrew, please could you give me your opinion before I submit my visa application? Thank you very much!

Welcome @Turbo98

In terms of form, there are a few small errors to correct, but in terms of content, I find the letter beautifully done. Well done!

If you explained your study project as well during your Campus France interview, there is no reason for them to give you reason 4. Now, there remains reason 5 (more common than reason 4) and reason 2 (funding your studies).

What are the tuition fees at this institution? You need to take this into account. You can clearly state that you have the necessary amount to finance both your tuition fees + living expenses.

@Andrew Thank you for your feedback!

Unfortunately, I was nervous during the interview.

My brother paid the registration fee of €900. The school costs €12,000 and we have to pay in two instalments: €6,000 in September and the rest in December. My brother is my financial guarantor. He earns €3,000 and some euros per month.

Should I mention in the letter that he is covering the school fees?

Thank you very much!

@Turbo98 I find your explanatory letter comprehensive. Congratulations

You risk having reasons 5 and 2, you need to check if your older brother is capable of financing everything: tuition + living expenses. A more thorough analysis of solvency is needed. I’ve already known such cases in Congo Brazzaville.

Kind regards.

Thank you very much!

Thank you very much!!