Campus France - Cover letter "I am accepted" in Computer Systems Architecture (original and corrected letter)

A student who has been accepted to the IT School of Amiens has asked us to assist them with the « I am accepted » procedure, also known as the pre-consular procedure. Below is their original letter, followed by the cover letter we propose.

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Original cover letter « I am accepted »

Sir, Madam, Holder of a general D baccalaureate and currently in the 2nd year of a bachelor’s degree in industrial computing and automation at the University Institute of Technology in Douala. I wish to join the 1st year of a bachelor’s degree in information systems architecture offered at the IT school.

Given that innovation is at the heart of the world we live in, and the IT school offers me a very comprehensive program as I wish to engage in a professional approach while integrating into the project of future digital talents.

Indeed, thanks to the training that the IT school offers me, which integrates all aspects of networking and digital, which is a major asset in the functioning of projects worldwide. I could easily acquire the solid knowledge and skills necessary to achieve my professional objectives.

Therefore, I could pursue a master’s degree after my bachelor’s to perfect myself in the field of networking and digital. At the end of this study project, which will allow me to acquire a dual competence in networking and digital, I plan to work as an Information Systems Architect in a company or institution.

This training will therefore allow me to develop and implement very appropriate strategies in communication within a network to successfully lead a change towards more ethical practices.

Ambitious, rigorous, diligent, and hardworking, I will implement all possible means to achieve my goals.

Thanking you in advance for your interest in my application, please accept, Sir, Madam, the expression of my best regards. End

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Corrected cover letter « I am accepted »

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Subject: **From Automation to Systems Architecture: A Journey Towards Excellence**

Sir, Madam,

Currently in the 2nd year of a bachelor’s degree in computer engineering at the IUT of Douala, I have long aspired to play a key role in technological evolution as an information systems engineer. My academic experience and practical internships have allowed me to acquire a solid foundation in IT development and technological project management.

Recently, I had the opportunity to collaborate on a digital transformation project for a local SME, where I contributed to the design of an integrated system architecture. This project not only reinforced my interest in information systems infrastructure but also motivated me to deepen my knowledge in this specific field to design advanced technological solutions.

I wish to join the Master’s programme in Systems and Networks Management at the IT School of Amiens, renowned for its innovative approach and close ties with the industry. This programme will enable me to develop the essential skills to design, implement, and manage complex and secure systems.

Moreover, joining your institute will give me the opportunity to engage in a new academic and professional community while improving my French language skills in an environment conducive to learning and cultural exchange.

I would be honoured to bring my passion and dedication to the IT School of Amiens and am available for a conversation to discuss my application in more detail.

Thank you for your time and consideration, and please accept, Madam, Sir, my distinguished regards.

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